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[禁忌之恋] 【家有美母】第九章 童贞没了!(下)代发

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吃了宋姨,不错,加油收女。
不过宋姨前面还非常保守,主角一来就轻易献出初吻,呻吟声还响彻病房。完全没必要这么写吧,可以先写宋姨碍于伦理,所以略微抗拒,等欲望逐渐压过理性,又想起主角一家对她的好,这才主动献身。
另外黄帝内经还自带敏感点查找功能,这让我大受震撼,写主角舔的时候无意间发现也好啊,还能加点情趣。
这章配图也很不错,看着更刺激了。
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